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The following scenes we wanted to start with her getting the message in the morning. This is the message that is going to start the conflict in the short story as she is going to overthink a million possibilities that could arise from it. We haven't decided on exactly what the message will say but it will be something along the lines of "Hey can we talk?" Then we wanted to express this whole mental discourse that she has with herself while she is getting ready to go to school. When I expressed this idea to my partner she feared that this morning routine would be too mundane and cheesy. She feared it would be the classic "What a beautiful morning time to get ready" ordeal. However, I clarified that it didn't have to be like that. We instead decided to take a much more comical and realistic approach to the average teenage morning routine. So we made a list of things we do in the morning even peeing, which might be controversial but I honestly think it is just a normal everyday thing that everyone does and it is not like we would show it in a perverted or obscene manner in any way.
Finally, we wanted to end it with them meeting at school. We have yet to decide exactly what he will say but we want the purpose behind the text message to be something super small and insignificant. We think by juxtaposing her overreaction with the meaningless reality behind the message will not only produce a humorous effect but we also want it to reveal the idea that often times humans simply do "blow things out of proportion" when we really have no reason to. Now we have to write the script and I'm really looking forward to it!
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